Dear, Blog
In my English class we have done many essays but Graduation 2011 was my favorite essay to write about. There are plenty of reasons why that is my favorite essay to write about. One reason is I believe I did a good job on my Introduction it was the best part of my essay. I also used great transitions to go along with my key points.
Firstly my introduction was the best part of the essay. I gave an interesting hook to the topic. I gave all of my key points. I also gave examples and explanations.
Secondly my transitions was on point. The transitions I used were on point. They went with the topic that I was talking about. The transitions were not repeated. My transitions fit in with my key points.
Sincerely,
K’la
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I think your letter was great. It explained your essay very well. Your letter had a begining middle and end.
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